Friday, November 2, 2007

The Angry American

Jim McKenzie

Most people would agree that the American society is based largely off of the pride of our country. Usually when there is a national tragedy the American public needs some sort of coming together to help coupe with the tragedy. After the terrorists attacks on 9/11 Americans needed something that would help ease the pain of our fallen brothers and sisters. When Toby Keith wrote the song Courtesy of the Red, White, and the Blue, also known as the Angry American song, many people thought that it brought our nation closer together and helped deal with our tragedy. Even though this song helped unite many citizens of the United States, what does this song actually mean?

Before anyone can analyze a song you must first understand who the speaker is speaking to. The song first starts off with the lines “American girls and American guys”. This immediately lets us know who the speaker is talking to. In the second line he says the word we. This lets us know that he is also part of the audience. The reader now knows that they have something in common and this will let them relate to each other better. The speaker says in the beginning of the song “My daddy served in the army when he lost his right eye but flew a flag out in our yard until the day that he died”. We now know much more about who the audience is when he says these lines. The speaker is talking to people who have served in the army or have a very close friend or relative that has served. The speaker can relate to this audience because he had a father who was in the military. These lines also let us know that even though his father lost an eye in the war he still flew his flag until he died. Even though he was affected by the war in a negative way his father never stopped loving his country. The next step in analyzing this song is to figure out what it is about.

In the first line of the third stanza the speaker says “Now this nation that I love has fallen under attack. A mighty sucker punch came flyin in from somewhere in the back”. This immediately lets his audience now that this song is going to be some sort of retaliation to the fact that some sort of enemy has attacked America without warning. The speaker then goes on to talk about as “Soon as we see clearly through our big black eye man, we lit up your world like the 4th of July”. The speaker is talking about relation in these lines. This means that once America has recovered from this tragedy and pulled together as one nation that they are going to attack with full force and pride. He then goes on to say how American icons are angered by the situation and are going to come at the enemy head on. He says “Hey Uncle Sam put your name at the top of his list and the statue of Liberty started shakin her fist”. Obviously these are two of the main American icons. They both represent freedom and that is what America is all about. The speaker also says “And the eagle will fly man, its going to be hell when you hear mother freedom start ringin her bell and it feels like the whole wide world is raining down on you brought to you courtesy of the red white and blue”. This is without a doubt a very bold statement saying that the American army is going to retaliate. When they do retaliate the enemy is going to wish that they had never attacked the USA. When the speaker says that “Justice will be served and the battle will rage this big dog will fight when you rattle his cage and youll be sorry that you messed with the u.s. of a. cause well put a boot in your ass it’s the American way”. This stanza is probably the most popular and meaningful stanza to many people. This shows our enemies that no matter who attacks our country they will not get away with it without a fight. And then you will be sorry that you ever even thought about picking a fight with our country. This song comes right out and tells you in the lyrics that America is a country based on freedom and our citizens are going to do everything in their power to make sure our freedom is protected even if it means going to war.

The song without a doubt uses pathos. Pathos is where the speaker uses emotions to affect his audience. In the song the speaker obviously uses pathos when he talks about America being sucker punched in the back. Anytime someone’s country is attacked it is obviously going to leave serious anguish. The speaker knows this and uses people’s emotions to get an uprising and to make people hopefully support retaliating back. He also uses pathos when he talks about how his father lost his right eye in a war. Whenever a friend or family member is affected in a negative way from war it is always going to leave scars on other people too. The speaker knows this because he has experienced it and knows other people have also experienced it. The song is purely about American Pride, something that our country has and will always have.

4 comments:

Katie Creel said...

I think he did a very good job explain how to song express so much meaning about angry Americans and how the song brought our country closer together. He also explains very well who the audience is and who the reader is talking to. When you stated “Justice will be served and the battle will rage this big dog will fight when you rattle his cage and you’ll be sorry that you messed with the u.s. of a. cause well put a boot in your ass it’s the American way”, I would have added after your next sentence why you think it is the most meaningful to many people. I would have focused more on ethos, pathos, and logos throughout the whole paper instead of just the last paragraph. You did a good job focusing on the song and the audience, but I would have added more about why you think Toby Keith chose to write the song.

jtaycock said...

I liked how you, in the first paragraph, stated the actual name of the song and then gave the name of the song that some people might not now it my. After that you should have stated in the next sentence why the song had an extra name or why it was called the Angry American. I also like your thesis; It is very strong and I can definitely tell where you are about to go with your paper in the next couple of paragraph. I think that you need to work on your intro sentence to your second paragraph it is very weak and does not flow with the rest of the paragraph. You need to work on the conclusion first of all you need to restate your thesis statement at the beginning. And also I think you should break the conclusion up into to paragraph. You should talk about pathos and thing wrap everything you in the last or conclusion paragraph.
Jeff Aycock

Unknown said...

I think that you did a great job in your paper by explaining the main purposes of this song was to bring the American people together after a tragedy placed on our country. Then you state that the audience is only people who are in the army or know people in the army. This goes up against your first statement that the song was to all American boys and girls and so I think you need to rethink who your audience is in your second paragraph. Also, there were a couple of times you would quote from the song and instead of explaining the line into further detail just restate what the line directly says. I would look more into lines some of the lines in the song. You did a good job though with the lines speaking about retaliation and what the symbolism stands for in this song. One last suggestion would be to make sure you speak more about ethos, pathos, and logos in your paper rather than just your last paragraph of your paper.

aepike said...

This essay is well constructed and has obviously been proofread several times because I noticed very minimal gramatical errors. The audience is uncovered clearly and the meaning of the song's lyrics were interpretted very accurately. I didn't find many problems with the essay at all, except for the lack of your views on the song. Why did Toby Keith choose this song and what does it mean to you? A good analysis of anything should include the answers to the questions you have, not just the general meaning. If you fix this, I believe you will have a great paper.