Sunday, September 23, 2007

Conquering Racism

When I entered the art gallery in Woods Hall, the first thing to catch my eye was a very simple picture of an aged African American man wearing a dark flat bill hat that had the words World War II Veteran stitched onto the front. This picture labeled “Rufus Davis” was taken by a man named Jonathon Purvis of the SynArts Cotillion. I am not completely sure what it was about this simple black and white picture that caught my eye but as I stood there and looked at the picture I began to realize that it was the simplicity of the picture that brought such a powerful message to me. At first glance the old man’s face looked stern and hard, but when I looked a little closer and into his eyes I noticed the old man’s apparent sadness. As I noticed his heartbroken face, I felt a tingling rise up my spine. This tingling sensation was the feeling of patriotism and respect for the people who have sacrificed so much for our country. In this picture, the old man’s face has the look of a man that has been deeply wounded and had much pain throughout his long life. However, despite his pains and suffering brought from the war and the racism of old times the old man wears his veteran’s hat proudly demanding respect from whomever he comes in contact with.


The next piece of art I chose to write about from the exhibit was an untitled picture with the initials L.B.M. 07 written into the bottom of the picture containing Muhammad Ali. This picture at first seemed to be of the famous fight between Muhammad Ali and Sonny Liston in which Ali knocked out Liston, but as I looked at it I noticed that in place of Liston is a robot gorilla whose body has been dismembered with his head knocked off. In this black and white picture, Ali stands swaggering in the boxing ring over his defeated opponent tensing his muscles after delivering his final blow to the gorilla robot. When I first saw this picture I could not help but notice that the audience in the background was largely made up of white males which added to the large amount of racial details among this piece of art.


Both of the pieces I have written about deal strongly with our older black generation defeating racism. In the “Rufus Davis” picture the war veteran has apparently fought in a war for a country of whites who were degrading and disrespectful to this man’s entire race. Despite his treatment this man fights for the country that he calls home and fights for the hope that one day he can be treated equally with the white race. The same applies for the picture of Muhammad Ali in that he lived in a time full of racism and violence and fought to become champion of a sport that had been for centuries a white man’s sport. Through Muhammad’s fighting he became a champion and a hero to many people pushing for change in the times of which racism and hatred was at its strongest. Both of these men are fighting against racism but they are both fighting it in their own different ways.


In contrast both of these people in the artwork are at a different point in their lives. Muhammad is shown fighting in his prime where his career is at an apex, whereas the picture of Rufus was taken far past his prime towards the probable end of his life. Ali’s life was probably a bit more luxurious and less along the lines of just making ends meat compared to Rufus’s life in which he was probably constantly doing hard labor and barely getting by to support his family or even just himself.


Each piece of art from Muhammad Ali to Rufus Davis and the many other pieces in the art exhibit each have their own meeting and story behind it. By attending the SynArts Cotillion art exhibit I have been able to expand my ability to write beyond sitting in the classroom and into the real world of writing about things out in the world. I also learned by attending the exhibit that there is more to art galleries than wealthy people walking around sipping their wines, but that art is for everyone willing to expand their creativity and inspire thought in people’s minds.

3 comments:

Jwhurn said...

Ryan, I like how you described these two pieces. One can get a mental picture when reading how you described the pieces of art. I like how you showed that the picture of Rufus Davis stirred feelings of patriotism in you. This shows that the artist had an effect. You did a very good job comparing the two pieces. Both Muhammad Ali and Rufus Davis, in their time period, did face racism and dealt with being mistreated by whites. I like how you pointed out that both of these pieces of art are alike in that they are both black men fighting for the right to be equal. The essay is very well organized. I feel that you could do a better job contrasting the two pieces. You could elaborate more instead of just saying they were at two different points in their lives. Why are these two pictures about racism? How do you know this? Give more reasons of how we know for sure that these two pictures are about black men fighting racism. I recommend that you give more reasons to support your statements about why these pieces are about race. Do a better job contrasting the two pieces. It was overall a great paper.

Catherine said...

2 things doing well—

1. Your paper seems well thought out and organized. I like that you broke every paragraph into a main idea and did not get off topic.
2. You did a good job comparing and contrasting the two pieces of art and giving examples.

2 things person could do better

1. I would read over your paper and check for grammar problems, I noticed a lot of missing commas or semi-colons and a few run on sentences. Read over your paper slowly to catch these mistakes.
2.Talk a little about your feelings on the art, show the audience how you felt, so they can imagine it even more.

2 areas to specifically focus on

1. Talk more in your paper about what the artist was trying to get across the audience
2. Although you had very good detail, talk a little more about the media used; make it so the audience can see these images just from reading your essay.

LMorris said...

Your essay is very clear and well organized. The paragraphs help organize your thoughts, and as a reader, it is very easy to follow. Also, your description of the two pieces is very good. You incorporated very vivid details, and the reader can easily picture what these pieces look like. You analyzed these pieces very well. One thing I did notice, though, is that you have a lot of grammatical errors. Watch out for run-on sentences. Make sure you include commas. Another thing you could address is what you think the artist was thinking when they painted these pictures. Is there a certain reason why the paintings ended up addressing racism? Some specific things to focus more on would be the compare and contrast paragraph. I feel you could explain more about the connection between the two pieces, if there is one. If not, how do they differ? Also, towards the end of the essay, maybe in the concluding paragraph, you could talk about how the pictures made you feel. You mentioned a little bit about your feelings in the introduction paragraph, but you could add more. Overall, it is a very well written essay. Good job.