Thursday, September 6, 2007

ANNA BANNA

THE REAL DEAL

Food Narrative

Essay 1

My mother is justly famous for her Banana Pudding. With roots deep in rural Alabama, and a home economist by trade, this should come as no surprise. Her banana pudding is so spectacular that we cannot have a family gathering without it!


There is nothing “instant” about the banana pudding at our house. My mother’s recipe is old and authentic. She got it from the Blue Moon Cookbook. The Blue Moon Inn was an old restaurant located in downtown Montgomery, and like all the old restaurants in Montgomery, it has long since “gone with the wind.” But, as for this recipe, I am sure it is the best one to be found anywhere. My mother has a massive cookbook collection and she makes a habit of trying out recipes from many cookbooks before she finds the “right one.” Such is the history of her banana pudding.


The recipe is not complicated but the ingredients must be very precise. The ingredient list looks like this:
six “just- right” bananas (not green but not too mushy either)
one box of Murray’s or Bud’s vanilla wafers (Nilla Wafers
can only be used if our local Piggly Wiggly is out of the
other brands)
eggs (extra large )
flour (White Lily)
sugar (Dixie Crystals)
half & half (any brand will do)
lots of real vanilla
real whip cream for topping (Piggly Wiggly brand is good)


The ingredients are basic, but they are real food—nothing imitation or packaged, and everything is carefully selected. The same procedure is followed each time the pudding is made. The preparation process takes some time because the custard must be cooked in a saucepan over low heat. After layering the vanilla wafers, bananas, and custard, the finished product is then topped with fresh whipped cream. (No meringue on this baby.)
Another very important part of this banana pudding is its presentation. It is always put together in a large, footed, crystal, trifle bowl. The bowl, along with its twelve inch pedestal stands about eighteen inches in height. The banana pudding always stands out among the other selections on the dessert table. It appears to be the “king” dessert and the other desserts are it’s subjects. Yet, it just a simple banana pudding.


Regardless of the occasion, the banana pudding must be served in the footed, crystal trifle bowl. My sisters and I insist on it—even if it is a picnic at the lake. We don’t even complain when one of us has to gingerly coddle in her lap in the car until it reaches it’s destination. So you can see, it is not just the soothing, rich taste of the pudding that makes it so spectacular—it is the presentation as well. Who else would take a plain, country, southern dessert and make it look so elegant?


This well-rounded dessert brings comfort and joy to all who savor it. It is the perfect compliment to life’s celebrations: Christmas, Easter, funerals, homecomings, graduations, and other milestones.


Wait a minute—something has just clicked in my brain. I should be like my mother’s banana pudding; an unpretentious leader among my peers. I should be true to myself and never an imitation of something. I should always be proud of my simple, rural heritage and the lessons I learned from it. I should always present myself as a lady and standout as a classic in any situation. I should not compromise on quality.


Most of all, I want to spread comfort and happiness to all I meet. I, like banana pudding, will become friends with those around me. If the governor puts me on his spoon and gracefully swallows me, I will remember to be kind and courteous to his position of power, without envy. I will be just as kind and respectful to the poor man who is delighted by my taste. During times of stress for others, I can be a small oasis for the weary. I can relate to the Rhet Butlers and the Billy Grahams and receive a satisfied response from both.


Whether we dip our banana pudding out of a Waterford bowl from Tiffanies or a plastic bowl from Wal-Mart, the look on our faces when we see and taste a banana pudding is the same. There is a lesson to be learned here: take the time to research and plan before making a decision, keep the ingredients pure and consistent and mixed in the right proportions, serve with class and dignity, and the proof will be in the pudding. If all the people of the world would love each other the way they love banana pudding, world peace would become a reality. Please pass the banana pudding!

4 comments:

Jen said...

first i really liked your paper. it was very visual and i could actually see the images in my head. another thing i liked is how you spelled out the ingrediance. very creative.
one thing i found that you could of done better was go into a little more detail of how it tastes or how it is actaully made. another thing is the metaphor at the end was a little much.
One thing i think you coudl foucus on is your gammar. it was good but a little choppy and the second thing is your use of cliches was a little much. i really did not understand what you ment by some of them. but all in all your paper was very good. :)

Hillary Moore said...

1.2 positives!
- I really, really liked how you started with the history of where the recipe came from, and your
“gone with the wind” part was great!
-Relating the banana pudding to the person you should be was creative. It showed how the
pudding could symbolize so many things about you.
2.Things to work on.
-While I liked the metaphor, I think it could have been worked in better. The placement of it made it really sudden and it was little awkward.
3. Focus on:
-Fluidity. It's definitely not bad, it's just a few places that need a little work.
-It was just a really good essay! I enjoyed it a lot and the ending was great!

lauren vowels said...

i love the desciption of the pudding

the history behind it seemed really important to you i could tell by your writing

maybe focus a little more on the preperation of you favorite dessert. you could add more visuals there as well

the relating onself to bannana pudding is a difficult task maybe try to work on the analogy more so it is not such a stretch

watch verb tense and good paper

kcperno said...

2 things you did well:
I loved the idea of talking about banana pudding (one of my absolute favorites!!) and how you also talked about how it was presented, which also made it that much better.
It was also cool how you pulled in how you want to “be like the banana pudding”.

2 things to do better:
Maybe talk more about how the banana pudding is made or how it tastes.
Also maybe lead into the part where you started talking about how you should be better, b/c it kind of came out of nowhere.

2 things to focus on:
Just focus more on the preparation and details of the banana pudding, and better introductions to the new topics in the essay.
GOOD JOB! It made me want some of my mom’s banana pudding!